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Guidelines for Using Foreshadowing in Your Writing

Foreshadowing involves crafting earlier scenes to build expectation, tension, or understanding ahead of later plot developments. Mastering the art of foreshadowing is essential for creating a well-structured narrative. In this article, we discuss 7 guidelines on how to foreshadow effectively. 

1. Foreshadowing should be paramount

It needs to be necessary. Not every future story event needs foreshadowing; save it for major plot events, else you risk your story reading like a melodramatic soap opera. A good example is a strange noise Hogwarts’ students hear from the wall in J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. That sound predicted the beast they later encountered.

2. Know the importance of foreshadowing

Foreshadowing portrays a character's action or an object that draws readers' attention and prepares them for a future plot event. Your foreshadowing needs to be pronounced for it to create suspense. Here, you can show your character hiding a knife in the inner pocket of his jacket; this portends a violent scene. It raises questions in the readers' minds, prospects that a future plot point can provide. Or, you may not intend to create active suspense; instead, you want to build a setup for a future plot situation. In this case, your foreshadowing should be subtle and inconspicuous.

3. Apply the 'Chekhov's Gun' principle

When the early parts of your novel include major actions, events, or revelations, these elements need a playoff later in your narrative. Otherwise, readers will feel dissatisfied or perplexed about the significance of events in your story. The principle of Chekhov's Gun applies to foreshadowing; if you mention a gun in your narrative, it should go off at some point. 

4. Start from the story outline

Think about foreshadowing early in the plot outline stage; it's a narrative device you need to pre-plan if you want to execute it effectively. Foreshadowing needs to surface far enough in advance to forewarn the reader, but not so far ahead that the reader forgets about it. With a story outline, you can identify the right places to present scenes or incidents that make readers remember a significant earlier event.

5. Don't make it too obvious

In getting foreshadowing right, the key is to insert hints that the reader notices at a near-subconscious level. Readers need to look back and see what events clearly foretold the playoff, which combines stunners with inevitability. One creative technique for inserting forewarning subtly is by using interruptions. Here, the main character may happen on a very significant hint but gets interrupted by a phone call or something else. As the character shifts focus from the discovery, readers get distracted too until the playoff.

6. Meet the expectations you've stoked

The setup your foreshadowing creates needs to be matched with a climax that meets readers' expectations. When your buildup doesn't live up to these expectations that you have stirred, your readers will close your book feeling totally disappointed. And you may have just lost a fan. Except where you intend an anticlimax that thwarts readers' expectations, you should try to deliver on the promise the suspense in your story has stirred. Most especially ones that a specific genre requires.

7. Make foreshadowing part of the revision process

You can include foreshadowing as a way of adding or fixing plot links. Here, you may have already completed your first draft, and you notice events that require forewarning. You can be on the lookout for these events during your editing process, finding ways to link the early parts of your novel with the ending. Shocking events can be a brilliant idea for some narrative, but leaving hints and clues for readers to pick up or ignore will make your novel remarkable.

Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Frank Stephen