Fate's Fray

Volume 1: The Story of Time No More

Fiction - Fantasy - General
600 Pages
Reviewed on 12/09/2014
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Author Biography

James Arthur Tocksworth lives in the southwest United States, and works as a quantitative analyst at a major financial services company. He holds a bachelors degree in mathematics, and both masters and doctorate degrees in engineering. In the area of complex systems integration, he has spent over ten years of his career. When not crunching numbers or writing, he enjoys time with his wife and dachshund.

Tocksworth is a published academic author who has always had a passion for fiction writing, and he finally turns his hobby into a dream come true. His breakthrough novel FATE'S FRAY is available in major ereader formats and print through Ingram.

    Book Review

Reviewed by Carol Thompson for Readers' Favorite

Fate's Fray Volume 1: The Story of Time No More by J.A. Tocksworth is probably one of the best, if not the best, fantasy books I have ever read. It's refreshing to read a fantasy book that is completely original and unique. Fate's Fray is not another Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones. Tocksworth takes on his own world with engaging prose and interesting characters. Despite being a lengthy book, the pacing and action keep moving so it's a much faster read than one would expect. The dialogue and narrative are well balanced and Tocksworth doesn't bog the story down with unnecessary prose or scenes.

The protagonist of the story, X'ieth Armstrong, who lives in the land of Karnath, has limited foresight into his future beyond what the blinded oracles can tell. His life turns upside down when he’s suddenly dragged into a supernatural problem overhanging the human kingdom that causes social, economic, and political upsets. X'ieth tries to balance his obligations with his marriage, as his pregnant wife Millicent is less than understanding when he must leave.

Not only is the story unique, but Tocksworth writes like Hemingway and Dickens. The prose flows fluently and Tocksworth makes good use of language. The writing is vivid and real. For example, in chapter 2, when X'ieth is once again summoned away, Millicent is upset. The dialogue exchange made me feel as if I was right there listening to the two bicker back and forth. As the story progresses, the varying emotions of X'ieth can be felt as with the other characters.

Another plus to this story is that it isn't so complex that the reader becomes lost. So many fantasy books go off in so many directions that it's difficult to keep track of the plot and characters. Tocksworth writes in a clear and concise manner so that the reader doesn't get confused. There are many riveting scenes and, overall, it's just a phenomenal story. I highly recommend this book for both young adults and adults. There's no profanity (wonderful that Tocksworth appreciates that good fantasy doesn't need to be peppered with profanity) and there are no overly graphic scenes. I would give this book more than five stars if I could.